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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2004-12-18 10:23 PM

Some would say
i'm a fool
to have loved you,

that the logistics
of such folly,
should have never
let capricious thoughts
like this arise,

to them i just reply,

i can no longer quell this fire,
than a storm retract its passion
from a cloud's insides,

that upon sensation
of your aura,
my eyes still conjugate
verbs upon the stars that rise,

and i can pen calligraphic passages,
formed on silver wisps of cirrus,
and write the lyrics burning
an infernal torch that will not die,

without dissertation or dissection
of the whyabouts, of how the heart
does cry,

(it simply is without logic)

the winter branches frame the weary sky,

within the lines of blackface onxy
i can siphon off the forming sunset,
and rearrange it
as it fades its colors,
and place them where
the souls of love eternal
come to realign,

(this place where i can conjure you up on will)

as wordlessness now takes over,

i know i will dream you
tonight,
dear lover,
from wherever distance
this heart may lie.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (12-19-2004 09:44 AM).]

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2004-12-18 10:33 PM

I can feel the ache and longing in this -
beautifully penned -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2004-12-19 07:08 AM

that upon sensation
of your aura,
my eyes still conjugate
verbs upon the stars that rise,

Wow! Wonderful interpretation of your longing heart.

Love and hugs, dear Michelle.
Margherita

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

3 posted 2004-12-19 10:28 AM

We are impoverished in trying to define love. It's cause, it's effects perhaps. We can stand still for its lightning bolt, wear the shocked face of its thunderstruck and even describe the deafened aftermath, but between seeing its brilliant-hope-covex promise and concave surrender there is only a dizzy-addiction.

Your poem of unreciprical, disrespected yearning emotes just that. Enjoyed

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

4 posted 2004-12-19 10:42 AM

Exquisitely expressed.

believe in what your heart feels...

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2004-12-19 04:04 PM

Explanations like this feed the passion of an eternal flame. I believe you carry the torch quite lovely.
TD

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

6 posted 2004-12-20 05:34 AM

very nice ma'am.... very nice indeed

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2004-12-20 08:06 AM

Too many outstanding lines to quote..

seriously beautiful writing...

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2004-12-20 08:59 AM

love is something two people do
and what others think
a good place for the "f" word

enjoyed this inky

never had second thoughts
unless they are just
replaying a good memory

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

9 posted 2004-12-20 02:53 PM

thanks a bunch for stopping in and reading my world

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