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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
parts of me want to curl up and hide the lies,from one's i love  are tearing out my inside the love i feel their anger will only kill i try to understand destroy the will, their command love and forgiveness i place in my heart they won't accept turn to hate yet won't let you depart i feel only love soft, tender as heavens, above yet my heart cries out my spirt shouts it needs to fly free see their faces hidden among a tree i can hear soul's sing as whispers encouraging my spirit to spread it's wings take flight been grounded too long set soul free so other's can go and do unto thee numbers are racing through my mind visions that undue the dead a place back in time ruins left they abanded THE DEVINE the colors 6 circles of light passing over their souls controlled by the unknown even when in sight curl up find a hole and die or open eyes abandon their lies get back souls control love, light wings,flight numbers, 6 trees, faces in the pic's can't let darkness control or i'll end up in that dark hole cut the chains gather their remains look to the sky it's time to fly [This message has been edited by MGROVES (12-04-2004 07:58 PM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
It is indeed time to fly and I could feel you straining at the tethers holding you. Good job with this, but you might want to go back and edit the few typing errors. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Printed this out Nuff said - worth keeping Dave |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thanks, but sorry i left out a couple of paragraphs. would not of know it first reply didnt say check on my spelling thanks dave. you dont know how much this means to me |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
you have strong wings, and will fly free whenever you let your heart and mind do so heart hugs and this is a very good write, m'friend |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing....James |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Amazing write Marsha!  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
marcia, I tried to reply to this in email and tried to send you email before, but it keeps saying your mailbox is full and won't let messages go through...it keeps sending the emails back I have been thinking of you, but haven't been able to contact you. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thankyou for replies, they mean alot. yea dixie, i moved, use adragonsdream@hotmail.com luv ya. and thankyou |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
awesome well done can you fly like a penguin |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
MGROVES: We alone hold the key, remember butterflys fly free. marty |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
What a powerful, meaningful write. Great poem! Eric |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thankyou all for your replies |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
What a portrayal of the classic struggle's in life nicely done little lady. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
The push and pull of feelings and emotions, like the tides that slowly ebb or fill. Life is so kin to that. Nicely done. |
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