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Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

0 posted 2004-12-15 04:14 PM

such drivel, and
just as i feel the warm
it rains

too bad moments don’t last forever

slow and steady
love-lines re-appear
with the pat-pat on my back
cold

tingles in rattle of my skin
and i dig my fingers deep
to grasp the sand in clench

pressing pelvis in the grain
how simple the earth
in its rotation, and mine
i raise a brow
to smile

let it pour, let it pour

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2004-12-15 04:15 PM

:: clapping:::

bravo ma'am... bravo...

now go check yur e-mail..

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-12-15 04:17 PM

Fantastic write...love this one Maree!!

Season's Greetings!

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

3 posted 2004-12-15 04:20 PM

tingles in rattle of my skin
and i dig my fingers deep
to grasp the sand in clench

Sure wish it was so easy to stop the time! Enjoyed...
miscellanea

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2004-12-15 05:19 PM

such drivel, and
just as i feel the warm
it rains
~smiling~ at you...

hugs
M

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2004-12-15 09:07 PM

enjoyed the senusality of this -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2004-12-15 09:09 PM

in perfect harmony
in sync with the rain
halleluyah !!!

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

7 posted 2004-12-15 09:14 PM

They don't, maybe...but we can hold on to them that long.....

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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2004-12-15 09:29 PM

brava lady....brava!

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2004-12-15 09:41 PM

Maree

"pressing pelvis in the grain
how simple the earth
in its rotation, and mine"

Feeling you here!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2004-12-15 09:54 PM

nice, yes

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

11 posted 2004-12-15 09:59 PM

Oh wow...
you got mail!

Now that? A treasure
in itself...

but this poem?

A monument to YOU...

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

12 posted 2004-12-17 02:57 PM

Thank you, you are all too kind. I appreciate all of you.

Maree

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

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