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It's Just a Pillow
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It's Just a Pillow |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
It’s Just a Pillow A pillow A form in my mind Soft and comfortable Becalming and kind Strange what it becomes So warm and molding Strange how it acts My dreams beholding It’s just a pillow Only sees me at night Doesn’t even move But it feels so right It’s fluff and material A shape, nothing less Takes a cherished dream Only my cheek to caress It’s just a pillow A place for some ease But somehow it finds me And gives me release Allows in my reverie Once again you ~ It’s just a pillow In coverlet blue |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
a pillow... sounds nice about now... nicely done ma'am |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
It made think of your hair upon a pillow, a sleepy golden storm - Leonard Cohen Something I hope you feel is relevant which is tied to the pillow and memories that I feel you saw in that. We met in a dinning room You in a velvet dress We met at different tables And talked away the rest We met on a train to Ipswich Our eyes eating the floor No central heating Just everyone and nothing more We met in a tunnel The lights off Just black When we came out There was no going back Now, we meet in memory Of what we didn't do And when we met in Sheppington We didn't know what to do So the essence of your magic Never escaped me at all You just live within me Your smile a kind of coup And hair on my pillow Was only basking You Dave |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Quite lovely! Love, Margherita  |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
A delightful read .... hugs, Marti A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I both understand and appreciate what you so beautifully wrote of. (Excuse my dangling participle! lol ) Love & Light, EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
enjoyed this |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
yes, I'm always happy to see my pillow  a lovely write Lady. Maree Oh, you speak to me in riddles |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Superbly done Lady, the rhythm, flow and all the words fitting so beautifully together. A Good Un~~!!~~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
But somehow it finds me And gives me release Allows in my reverie Once again you ~ Oh, yes. *S* I know this so well. *S* Beautiful! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
nicely done Lady... very nicely done... The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Lady..this is so tender, and with just the right amount of sadness. Heart Hugs~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
it is never just a pillow~~  M |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
What Maureen said... Love this... "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Like this! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
like a cloud bank white inviting each night the down of the goose is fluffy and loose I'll lay my head there for dreams it will spare glider |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Pillows are a very special thing...the right one will whisk you off to dream land and the wrong one will leave you tossing and turning, wishing to find just that one that feeeeels so right! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I need two pillows...one to sleep on and one to hold....James |
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