Open Poetry #34 |
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Untitled Faith |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296![]() |
You are my heart A place in the west Sacred writings with wings Metaphysical libraries Joining aphorisms Have you spoken with Grace? Who are the Pagans? Starts for the mind Where the soul meets the heart Who can say without reason? Absurd, the shine that waves Yet returns….. Counseling Light verses By the unstable glow of light In the mainline Winding up the world Like a top Ready to spin for the child Designer programs By some source of managed care Which never stops turning |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
now there is a mouthful of hymns while whistling enjoyed this ms leej |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You are my heart A place in the west Sacred writings with wings I like this very much, dear lady! *S* |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
The immages are powerful! I liked this a lot! Keep it up!!! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Very Nice - ![]() Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
This deserves read at least three times before daring to respond. It's that erudite (learned but too the word from which rude came from which fits nicely with aphorism "A tersely phrased statement of a truth or opinion") But you crossed no line that would offend and your message was soft. While you may have had a personal meaning to the "western heart," such a thing would mean you are facing north which suggests hope. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Lee, It's nice to be here again, reading your poetry. You always catch me with the imagery, sending me into my own little world momentarily. This really struck a chord with me. "Winding up the world Like a top Ready to spin for the child" miscellanea |
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