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Open Poetry #34

Silver Note - rewrite

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2004-12-15 02:36 PM

I need to write a lot more on this, I know

Dave

Silver note
Writing shaped air
Dancing in eyes
Dancing in sunlight
Journey, destination, challenge
Kissing every crystal moon
Of it’s delight

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2004-12-15 03:05 PM

Pretty - I like this-

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

2 posted 2004-12-15 04:09 PM

Dave,

I like it just as it is! A pleasure to read.
miscellanea

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