Open Poetry #34 |
Speaking In Memories Is Like Speaking In Tongues |
icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
I’m staring at fossils, shadows of life gone, echoes and time tricks, with never a tear shed for changes, millions of years gone as if all their purpose was to say, “I was here,” although all kith and kind have vanished on the learning trails on which all life forms wander as we learn awareness never builds the ties that bind, nor does knowing answers bring us peace of mind. It’s coming on to Christmas time, I should point out Santa was a pagan too, the twinkle in his eye comes from within and what he knew, for reasons of my own my hair is grown quite long and now that my full beard is turned fully white, young children with big eyes dragged out to go shopping often tug at Mom-sleeves when I come into sight. It’s lunchtime back in Amsterdam and you’re asleep in Mexico, I’ve been awake since four AM dreams too desolate you know, this bubble we call modern times won’t survive when coming change winds blow and all around me will be gone, I hope you’re safe in Mexico. ©2004 by icebox |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you definitely have a way with the tongue |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very interesting write. Love that last verse. Mexico won't be exempt but I suppose you can always hope that long lost love will make it through.........Damn heart will squeeze you into memoryville everytime. Eric IF YOU HAVE TO JUDGE SOMEONE DO IT ON THE SIDE OF MERCY AND LET TIME SEASON THE RESULTS. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
I'm not certain it will be safe anywhere. Most judeo christian holidays were placed to block the view of equinox, solstice or any time where man, when much wiser and closer to the seasons and the ground, paid tribute to that blessing we now ignore, mother earth. Enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
icebox In the beginning Time created the end and Chaos did decend Well said my friend. |
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stevebrklynnyc Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 292GA, Camden |
As usual, your posts keep me coming back for more. I sometimes wonder why people sometimes forget the real meaning behind Christmas, I cant help it sometimes this time of year, catholic stuff, lol. Enjoyed very much sir. |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
this bubble we call modern times won’t survive when coming change winds blow and all around me will be gone, I hope you’re safe in Mexico. I totally agree---isn't it remarkable how quickly it passes? Each day slipping into the next as we fail to cherish the events, until it disappears---leaving us wondering where did it go? Thanks for reminding me to notice now, for truly isn't that all we have? |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Must be the season of time or the time of season Dave |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Iceman, you write with such wisdom and knowledge, and I very much enjoy it....even when I can't find the right reply to answer. Psssstttt....I'll bet those little kids really do think you're Santa Claus, with the long hair and beard!! HeeHee!! Hugs, Ethel |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"as we learn awareness never builds the ties that bind, nor does knowing answers bring us peace of mind" Amen. some people never know and others know and it just doesn't bring them what they thought it would. love ya Icy. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
well done sir... well done indeed... |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
well done indeed, kind sir glad to have found this My spirit will rise |
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