Open Poetry #34 |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
In a moment set aside for sleep, When in shadows dreams creep, Bottles broke on bricks walls, Sirens sound responding to calls And in time the disturbance pass Leaving for the broom broken glass. Gloom |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Professor, LOL it happens every time, enjoyed. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
must be Scary sometimes...the most noise I get here to wake me is truck traffic vibrations or teenagers revving their engines on this corner... M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I've thrown a few bottles in my time, I admit |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
leaving for the broom broken glass.....that made me smile, for some reason. Atov~ |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Hey Mr. Gloomy! Who sweeps up the glass? ![]() "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I can't sleep either. Well done. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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