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Open Poetry #34

Its over

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

0 posted 2004-12-10 12:02 PM

Here you go, saying it again
I am so furious, I am not sure where to begin
You tell me you are leaving
Don't want this anymore
Inside I am screaming
Pack your stuff and out the door
"Go ahead leave with all your stuff"
But keep in mind your not coming back when times get tough
Again, you leave me to take on the responsability alone
But then again, what would you know about responsability, something you've never known.
There is so much anger I have and have kept it inside
Use me, abuse me
This time it's a permanent "goodbye"
Do you challenge me in hopes that I will beg you to stay?
Bet you'd never thought I actually tell you to pack it up and be on your way.
I tried to give you what you need
But instead I am accused of being mean
You've been gone for a couple of days
And I am relieved
You are calling me and wishing you didn't leave
Blame it on me and call it my fault
All I know is I can now live my life, relax, spend time with my kids and have a chocolate malt.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-12-10 12:43 PM

stand your ground

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2004-12-10 07:40 PM

amazing...we think it will hurt so bad if they leave, then when they do, it's a relief. Hope you are ok...(((hugs)))

Hockeychick19
Member

since 2002-10-29

Posts 430
Massachusetts, USA

3 posted 2004-12-10 08:13 PM

Awesome write!!!!! Keep your head held high

~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

4 posted 2004-12-13 12:07 PM

PS- Thanks! I am going to stand my ground.

SEA- Thanks for the hug. Its been an up and down battle with emotions. Im not sure if I miss him or hate his guts.

H19- I appreciate your support.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2005-04-25 06:20 PM

Nice writing...James

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