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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-11-26 06:09 PM

Bullet Train To Japan

Suki was always late for her date.
She had an attitude of "Men can wait,
if they want me they must take me as
I am, catch me if they can, and they
definately must wait to hold my hand.
Only those who persevere will know the
thrill of riding my bullet train to Japan."
I told Suki that she was Kuki, and I
was not in favor of her silly plan.
She told me if I didn't like it, I
could eat rotten sushi and take a
big jump off of Mt. Fuji, because I
wasn't much of a man if I couldn't wait
to hold her hand and in no way deserved
to ride her bullet train to Japan.

JamesLee
November25
2004
This is about women
that are late.
I know its silly.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2004-11-26 06:43 PM

yes, a bit silly

M

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

2 posted 2004-11-26 09:14 PM

This poem put a smile on my face.

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:*
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-11-26 10:06 PM

left me smiling too

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2004-11-26 11:22 PM

Thank you nakdthoughts, Alli4000 and Susan for the nice responses...what do you do to women that are late to reform them...is there any hope...or will they always be the slow train to Georgia...James

time prophet
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since 2003-07-30

Posts 371
In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees

5 posted 2004-11-27 03:25 AM

James, I regret to advise that you are trying to achieve the impossible. If a woman has a tendency for lateness it's inbred, it can't be changed.

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

6 posted 2004-11-27 07:17 PM

Great write James!

Eric

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2004-11-27 07:27 PM

James, this put a smile on my face, too.

I liked it....but, regretfully, I am one of those
women who tend to be late a lot.
Hugs,
Ethel

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

8 posted 2004-11-27 08:03 PM

Damn, I'm never late, always punctual, though I wish I was, then I wouldn't have to wait for the hubby while he got ready....sigh...or anyone else.

Enjoyed James

Mxx

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2005-05-10 07:27 PM

Thank each one of you for the kind responses....James

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