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Open Poetry #34

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~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

0 posted 2004-12-08 08:32 PM

breaking clouds,
and into the sea,
scraping skies,
standing high
above the masses,

I am brave...

barrelling forward;
forceful momentous truth
crumbling
tall mountains
canyons file at my wake.

I am strong...

Slammed.
Stopped
to a hault.
weak and afraid
a bleeding heart.

I am sorry...

I am sorry.

~ the stuff dreams are made of ~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2004-12-08 11:35 PM

Nice...James

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

2 posted 2004-12-09 01:30 AM

great writing

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-12-09 07:41 AM

3 very humble words which can change whole perspectives and bandage wounds...

Well done

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

4 posted 2004-12-09 12:33 PM

Thank you LeeJ.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-12-11 12:43 PM

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

6 posted 2004-12-11 11:49 AM

I enjoyed this...but its amazing how much strength a person can have when their heart has healed

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2004-12-11 01:26 PM

Well said DC.

Season's Greetings!

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