Two Waka for Fading Autumn

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Open Poetry #34

Two Waka for Fading Autumn

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

0 posted 2004-12-11 11:22 AM

Above blackened cliffs,
sundown burns the darkening sky;
this early dusk-
as lengthening nights intrude;
do clouds have memories too?

~~~~~~~<@>~~~~~~~

Passions rage,
becoming the river of heaven
in the midnight sky-
beyond the bridge of dreams
hearts melt together as one.

~P

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2004-12-11 11:24 AM

Beautiful stuff!

Eric

IF YOU HAVE TO JUDGE SOMEONE DO IT ON THE SIDE OF MERCY AND LET TIME SEASON THE RESULTS.

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

2 posted 2004-12-11 11:27 AM

Thank you Eric....~P

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2004-12-11 02:08 PM

Above blackened cliffs,
sundown burns the darkening sky;
this early dusk-
as lengthening nights intrude;
do clouds have memories too?

the clouds remember
as they bear down
to birth the rain

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-12-11 02:10 PM

very pretty

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