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Open Poetry #34

mirage by hand

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-12-11 10:59 AM

walking an invisible dog
down an invisible pier
just down a visible ocean
from an invisible yacht

and smoking another shot
of invisible dan jack
listening to the fleetwood man
mad mac in invisible concert

for a party of indivisible two
at the invisible ritz
tabled by the invisible
window with reflections

of the gypsy's visibility
_____________

dark

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2004-12-11 11:12 AM

Dark

Nothing like an active imagination and you're using a very vivid one here.

Super images...

Eric

IF YOU HAVE TO JUDGE SOMEONE DO IT ON THE SIDE OF MERCY AND LET TIME SEASON THE RESULTS.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-12-11 12:57 PM

Look at you,
pretzeling words...

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