Open Poetry #34 |
soggy leaves |
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
soggy leaves carpet the sidewalks presenting a slippery pathway beware as scent of winter settles in moments of reflect the choices I have made ...some regrets yet few memories would I change, for winter’s cold seeks only to remind that touch of spring gifts a weary foot fall before the snow is cast away I sit a while feel warm pondering thoughts of you |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Kacy this feels much like a warm comforting blanket of emotion. Lovely writing m'friend. Hugs. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
You read me well, Donna. Thanks, for being such a gentle spirit. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
nice, ive sincerly missed your inspiration |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Kacy There are some very soggy leaves here, as well. The time of change between seasons is a good time to reflect. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Liked this very much Kacy. Wonderful feel of thoughtful moments, and good memories. Nothing better in life than to be at ease with the self, and our surroundings. Good write. TD |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Beautifully written. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Kacy...much enjoyed. Hugs~ ~ Let peace begin with me... ~ |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Very, VERY beautiful write. ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
namaste, thanks to each of you, I really appreciate these moments we spend together |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
mmmm.... nice one ma'am... very nice |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
http://forum.poetryconnection.net/viewtopic.php?t=4611 |
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Dautz Write Member
since 2004-11-16
Posts 96 |
seasonal ponderings among the soggy leaves, the crystal white, the sunshine glows, the springing appetite... (It's not even winter, and here I find myself skipping to spring!) dautz |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Ron, thanks m'friend John, an interesting link, thanks, I enjoy reading that poet. Dautz, thank you so much for reading, and for your poetic reply! |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
You rarely wade in romantic waters. Perhaps it's too deep? I enjoyed this very much. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Ah, Ken, I don't want to get in over my head. *sigh* There are so many incredible romantic writers here, I always think my romantic writes just don't float as well as some others. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kacy? I adore this because My God, yes . . . exactly: the choices I have made ...some regrets yet few memories would I change, very few would I indeed change. |
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