Open Poetry #34 |
a perfect eight on ice (a duet with Dr Moose) |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Horizons right-to-left-to-right ever changing view I might bear witness Torah, Torah, dance It is where I am and that is where you've been before. I come a-shore through changes over eons and the prophecies made upheavals, wrote the creed - I have known of this and more - eruptions and their smolderings that have blocked the sun endured. We seeded these - diversity curiosities we dared. We thought this as we bent our knees making signs of worship - trees frozen planet, bare would care and give a damn of fate. All this time forever lied the two of us were ever twine when fire scorched the planet's crust I saw you in the cold exhale dancing air amid the flames within the skins of game I craved living out the lie inside snapping in the green. We sacrificed we held the sky we watched it turning rust in rays dancing lasers light from us civilizations, burned to dust in the red eye dawn again. Atlantis be reclaimed. There, you spin infinity a perfect eight on ice two figures on a stretch of sand oblivious to all the world as such as it might be command. I raged and watched us two escape immune as is such purity most destructive path of eye. Wrath observed our movements - and I let the moon eclipse herself and laughed my ass off as I sighed giggles in the dark we died, as we wept the years away and chiseled Nature's epitaph. Imagining that you are still dancing there behind the fan hiding your amusement as you hear me whisper, "Deja Vu" it is me that you... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Amazing duet. Did I know you both then....or should I know you now? Or were you two the only ones besides myself and him? Absolutely bewitching. Chris |
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Dautz Write Member
since 2004-11-16
Posts 96 |
I agree. You two have made a perfect eight! Incredibly written with quite a message! Dautz |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What energy propelled this excellent duet! Seamless. TD |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wow! Wonderfully done you too!!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Popping in the thank the good Doc for the duet--he is truly a talented poet and such a lovely gentleman. Thanks for the inspiration, Doc, and thanks, good people for giving us a read. Love to all. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Serenity, Our worlds are as large as we make them, thank you for giving me a glimpse into yours. "Let time languidly wash over us as a wave." Doc |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
This is the most enlightening duet I have read in a very long time. Take a bow, each of you - for this IS timeless . . . |
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