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Open Poetry #34

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~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

0 posted 2004-12-04 01:42 PM

pricking
my side,
my own
thorn.

from
the womb
of my heart,
my enemy
born.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-12-04 01:46 PM

damn

awesome!

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

2 posted 2004-12-04 05:03 PM

deeply cut and pondering. nice job.

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

3 posted 2004-12-04 10:52 PM

you always make me blush shadows...

thanks.

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

4 posted 2004-12-04 11:14 PM

awesome write!

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:*
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

5 posted 2004-12-05 01:06 AM

Can see this in me as well...as I question relations around me from time to time

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