Open Poetry #34 |
Epictetus |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
If this day is not to be when birth or boatman comes for me, then in this time as yet unchanged let my being... still alone learn and teach that being still... is quite enough for gratitude. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is very beautiful piece of work. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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time prophet Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 371In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees |
I like the sentiment expressed |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Amazing.... ~Alli~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love this! |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Very zen-like. Objects in motion tend to remain emotion or something like that. There are reasons why still equals peace (and too their waters run deep). I read once that when found in a difficult and even dangerous situation if one withdraws into himself and does so purely that he almost becomes invisible to the danger. I had an opportunity to practice it once and it worked. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you Richard for sending me with the link in another response... enjoyed ~~ M |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
this was amazing can you fly like a penguin |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I will never understand PIP in this....sometimes the very best work is simply not seen. Here's an example. Let's fix it with a little trip up the list! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Absolutely agree with this 100% - great write. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
sigh |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
being a being is nice. |
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