Open Poetry #34 |
Bobbie |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Long Slender autumn Evening skies Cheeks chill reddened Pale blue eyes Secrets forbidden I still listen Cherish the favor Remember And savor Loving The stuff of dreams |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sweet! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Seems to me I'm getting to be a fan of yours.....wait a minute while I check.....hmmmmmm......yep, that's what I'm doin'! Depth without volume, something I respect in a poet. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
lovely writing |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I, too, am finding myself looking for you whenever I get the opportunity to be here...you always manage to touch me...not something easily done anymore |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I haven't read one yet without wishing I'd written it. Yep, I'm a fan too! Well done, again, John! |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Thank you everyone for the encouragement. John |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Very nice write john...enjoyed~ ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
good. |
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