Open Poetry #34 |
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Midnight Walk in Battle Creek [with a nod of understanding to the North...] |
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Sunshine
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![]() Midnight Walk in Battle Creek Night and darkness shadowed in as heavy gray clouds felt of snow quiet is the air, and thin, awaiting Mother Nature’s show O the beauty of a night first born, a Michigan town, Battle Creek smells of grape nuts in early morn for these are memories I would keep. Company had come by that night, good times were had by all, then it soon chimed, 'twas midnight and snow had begun to fall Twenty miles east of Kalamazoo Battle Creek quietly resides, Kalamazoo has great winds, true, off Michigan’s great lake side Battle Creek is a different town, as quiet reigns over the snow, instead of drifts and shifting hills the white just chooses to grow. Midnight walks on streets of white a wondrous treat in its own, this is when magic begins, and why we believe in cherrystones. Did you know that snow has song? It's heard when winds don’t blow, crystalline tinkling is taken to heart and snow fairies softly glow ~ I know for we stood, quiet, still, heard chiming tings softly surround no one spoke, but shyly descried as snow came twinkling down. O Battle Creek of Michigan, someday I’ll come to visit again. ~*~ ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 29 September, 2000 revised 15 December 2003 Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises... |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"Did you know that snow has song?" Yes I do, I have heard it many times drum its gentle beat against my parka..Its rhythm is enchanting..What can be expected but beautiful music from enchanters such as snow fae's? enjoyed _____________ice ><> |
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Martie
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Karilea This is lovely....But I always thought of snow as very quiet...I'm glad to know that it talks. Of course, I haven't seen that much of it. Happy Thanksgiving, Sissy! ![]() |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Did you know that snow has song? It's heard when winds don’t blow, crystalline tinkling is taken to heart and snow fairies softly glow ~" Yes I do know that snow has song for I heard it soft and clear last night. ~Blessings to you and yours this Thanksgiving Karilea~ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Did you know that snow has song? It's heard when winds don’t blow, crystalline tinkling is taken to heart and snow fairies softly glow ~ yes i do too it's saying dont curse me for the calamity i may bring, please see the gifts in the pausing moment |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
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Beautiful! Eric |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
maybe one day I'll write like this...I can only hope thanks for sharing |
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*Alli4000*![]()
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
*sigh* absolutely beautful. ![]() ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
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Did you know that snow has song? It's heard when winds don’t blow, crystalline tinkling is taken to heart and snow fairies softly glow ~ Hopefully one day, when I see it, that I'll be able to hear it too.... Beautiful Kari ![]() into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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