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I remember |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
I remember I remember you every day since that day you left Your silence words Your rose Your gifts Your letters Tell me how I can remove you from my soul I remember you when I laugh and when I cry I remember you when I fly and when I write Your part of my heart No way to get you back No place to see your eyes Your night shadow what I got And those romantic dreams we used to have Still saved inside I remember you each day and every second Is there a miracle to get you back to me? What shall I do? I still love you and will never stop loving you Coz I remember everything in you And I remember that you’re the best in me I remember you You Are My End Secret Life... Be Sure That I Can Be always With You... Through The Distances... Through Life Troubles... Me And You Is One... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The longing is beautifully rendered. It's the attachment that makes it all so painful, we should learn to let go ... Love, Margherita |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Yes almost haunting Dave |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well written ache of heart. Enjoyed the read. Hugs~Nancy ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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stevebrklynnyc Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 292GA, Camden |
If it is meant to be, trust me it will happen. If it is real, dont let it go, keep trying, you never know. Enjopyed the write, thanks, Steve. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 beautiful |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Thanks all of you for replying. This is really nice from you. well trust me I will let it go.. Be with me all of you. Hugs You Are My End Secret Life... |
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Night Shadow Junior Member
since 2002-08-04
Posts 41 |
Love never ever can been removed from hearts, specially if its a very pure and real love. Some times we force to move in ways without our choice. Not always dreams can be true specially if it was just a Romantic_Dream, and Some times Dreams are much better than true life, and it may makes us better to know that there are some 1 who will never forget us even in his Dreams. So sensitive worlds sweet secretlife, sure its not strange from some 1 like u. |
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