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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2004-11-25 01:19 AM



Cherry blossoms
white as snow
below Mount Fuji

Toads at rest
beside an ancient bell

White faced girls
with jet black hair
dressed
in silk kimonos

A crying child
of two years old
abandoned on a road.


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-11-25 05:26 AM


what a last verse
sad

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2 posted 2004-11-25 01:13 PM


omg.... ...sad...
Happy Thanksgiving to you!

~Alli~

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3 posted 2007-05-15 11:41 PM


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