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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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0 posted 2004-11-23 07:32 PM



Autumn falls
Long along
A small lake shore

Flights of geese
Pass overhead
A cool breeze sways
The White Oak leaves

Deer graze at the edge
Of harvested fields
Large white clouds
Drift across the sky—

She walks the Earth
And makes it good

From tree to tree
The sparrows sing

© Copyright 2004 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
DavePage
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1 posted 2004-11-23 07:39 PM


Excellent

Dave

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2004-11-23 07:47 PM


a beautiful portrait
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-11-23 08:13 PM


Lovely images created here.  Much enjoyed.

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2004-11-23 11:28 PM


Silky...James
Drauntz
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5 posted 2007-05-15 11:43 PM


picture well painted.
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