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Open Poetry #34

The Third Day

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2004-11-22 07:21 PM

This wood
burns well.
Resting beside the shore.

Those rocks across,
their distance kept,
so far away,
though desolate,
seem to me almost...comely.

I've been there.
Nothing grows.
It's a very hungry
island.

At one end a light burns
dim to warn the wary.

Perhaps some day
for reasons clearly
not my own,
someone will want to build a bridge
for going
and coming where nothing grows.

At that time,
free of charge,

I'll give him
all my nails.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-11-23 04:53 AM

excellent ending!

~eternal child~
Junior Member

since 2004-11-23

Posts 31

2 posted 2004-11-23 07:05 AM

he'll need a hammer too

nice to read you

~ec~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-11-23 07:36 AM

hopefully we will all help to build that bridge....

Perfection here John
Enjoyed

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

4 posted 2007-05-15 11:45 PM

good.

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