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In Lieu of Meteors
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In Lieu of Meteors |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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The planet Venus especially bright tonight while the crescent moon seems lost in dream Out of the east with his starry belt askew Orion rising from the sea |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
John, thank you for this. I wish I had a clear sky tonight, just to see. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
cute. to the see stars in space would be a beautiful thing.. now im inspired to write something, DOH! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love your titles! awesome write! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I really like your style. I read a few others of yours and really enjoy them. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Thanks everyone. iliana, Appreciate your comment. Unlike other sites, it's not possible to know how many have actually read something without commenting. Thanks again John |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Orion rising over the mountain on my way home tonight was spectacular. |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
maginfiscent view in my mind's eye now. well done! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
short and sweet... ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
I read it and it is beautiful, again beautiful. |
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