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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2004-10-21 09:34 PM


Steven


Hey old man,
glad you came...
It’s been awhile.

Yes,
my wife is proud of her figure,
her looks,
which...
is an affluence
she was born with.

Still
into your Chekov?

Oh, she likes to read
the lighter things;

easy romances
and glamour magazines.
She doesn’t care
for unhappy endings.

My music
makes her sleepy.

She’s the kind of woman
you marry
after the woman you love
has left the world.

She’ll do.

Another drink?

Oh no,
of course not,...

I was simply tired
of being cold.


© Copyright 2004 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2004-10-21 09:50 PM


John, not sure if you wanted two voices...
or just one...
but it worked for me...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-10-21 09:56 PM


Very much enjoyed overhearing this coversation.
Well done John.
Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
3 posted 2004-10-21 10:26 PM


"I was simply tired
of being cold."

amen


Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
4 posted 2004-10-21 10:46 PM


That hurts......

Don't settle.

Juju

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
5 posted 2004-10-22 04:33 AM


You are quite the conversationalist, *smile*

My goodness, how sad:

She’s the kind of woman
you marry
after the woman you love
has left the world.



Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
6 posted 2007-05-14 11:45 PM


"She’s the kind of woman
you marry
after the woman you love
has left the world." very loud!!! I never trust those kind of words. love...can be very simple unless man wants it completed. Simply heir related.

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