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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-11-15 08:16 PM

I did not misinterpret the thunder of your words
I chose to stand before them, abysmal in the surge
As strength is not a shield, nor courage a sword
Blown to particles of dust never more everything
So small the chime of invisible fracture

And though love has the capacity of it’s own universe
There to never knit finds the infinite prophecy
Filling void that far again outweighs what was
And for all that I do not know, the sea is deep
Where peace finds homage at the bottom of the glass

And heavy enough the treasure to be found still

Copyright Kkh 11/15/04

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2004-11-15 08:51 PM

Oh dear Lord, what has she wrought?

Oh K. this is beyond words or speech.
Maybe I am just being an old puss...

So many words that just leap out at you
and pull...

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2004-11-15 10:23 PM

And though love has the capacity of it’s own universe
There to never knit finds the infinite prophecy
Filling void that far again outweighs what was
And for all that I do not know, the sea is deep
Where peace finds homage at the bottom of the glass

And heavy enough the treasure to be found still
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Such a beautiful mind you have Kathleen.
This poem of yours is so very sigh worthy~

Hugs to you good poetess~

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

3 posted 2004-11-16 01:07 PM

You are so right in that love does find the capacity of it's own universe ... it creates it and stretches it beyond possibilities. You see much and share it wonderfully and here is wishing that you always find wine in your goblet of life.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2004-11-16 01:11 PM

there is confidence in your words, along with great understanding....
exceptional read, thank you

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-11-16 01:24 PM

Fantastic write here Kathleen..
Such wonderful insight you have.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me ~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-11-16 05:01 PM

excellent!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2004-12-27 01:45 PM

'As strength is not a shield, nor courage a sword"

so very true...

loved this TD!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

8 posted 2004-12-27 08:09 PM

Awesome write!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

9 posted 2004-12-27 11:16 PM

do not know, the sea is deep
Where peace finds homage at the bottom of the glass

exactly!! where all finds resolution and serenity
in her respite

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

10 posted 2004-12-28 12:14 PM

inked goddess was grabbed especially by the same lines as I

good stuff here, TD!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

11 posted 2004-12-28 12:17 PM

omg lady...

As strength is not a shield, nor courage a sword

the depth and understanding...
this write IS perfect.

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