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Eyes That Were
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Eyes That Were |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Emotions grouping around We saw what could not move The wolf and seraph Sense a dialogue bemused Encompassing night touching hours Rests rhetoric On my breast unfurling sound of your moist words To eyes which immortalize Where fish swim one sphere Playful lights amplify Eating our souls pursuing fullness A peaceful glow, bird of paradise charm Changing course with daring Elegant flowers on white sand We stroll along a blushing wind Sigh A blushing world Hand in hand Possessing kind summer days Of sweet sirens drowning, seeking Pure energy sources join Heaven smiles with leisure Upon our inner painted bridges Where we through off wishes…together, once Painting Grecian art with sensual trailers A new found land of river souls Where the intellect becomes purer Focus becomes understood And there we encompass value For which there was always folds The taste of mind knit skin Un-named could have beens Small boats with oars Deeply immersed in everyday life A greater virtue of the individual Dynamic ever changing Making copious assent With sage by our sides Where ‘we’ came into being |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LOL...yes, Lee, quite possibly I did have tea with your amusing Muse... Mine refuses to out herself! [The little flirt is probably with a himself...don't y'know!] |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
A blushing world Hand in hand Possessing kind summer days Of sweet sirens drowning, seeking Pure energy sources join ::like this :: nice scribe, LeeJ! **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Deeply immersed in everyday life A greater virtue of the individual Dynamic ever changing Making copious assent With sage by our sides Where ‘we’ came into being" Much enjoyed the read this lazy afternon Lee. Your imagery is awesome lady! Hugs~Nancy ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Dautz Write Member
since 2004-11-16
Posts 96 |
Lots of neat imaginery here. Especially liked this: A new found land of river souls Where the intellect becomes purer Focus becomes understood And there we encompass value For which there was always folds The taste of mind knit skin Dautz Write... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
A new found land of river souls Where the intellect becomes purer Focus becomes understood And there we encompass value For which there was always folds *********** This whole piece but especially the above lines prove my point when I say you have a way of seeing the focals of life and bring them to the forefront to share with the world. You have an understanding and a unique ability to convey such. It is always a treat to read you words and this one is of course no exception. Superb AGAIN. |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
WOW Leej, I don't read your work often.. but I think I'm going to start. I enjoyed this a lot!  Smile |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
What i would like to know is do you ever wirte a bad poem?...I have never seen one with my eyes...your choice of words never fails to impress me..that is what makes you unique..thank you.. Goldenrose. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Well done Lee!  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
I do agree with all the above, your poetic philosophical mind is pouring out wonderful words in this write. Good one Lee J. JL |
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