Open Poetry #34 |
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Sad Face |
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DarkDreamer Junior Member
since 2004-09-04
Posts 19nowhere,special |
Hay you! With the Sad Face! Why are you so down? Is it this dead-end place? Take off a smile and plaster a frown. You got it all, Sad Face. So tell me, why are you so broken? So tell me, why is your love lost without a trace? So tell me, why are your tears so open? Is it cause all is nothing? Is it cause tears are something? Is it cause love is thin? Is it cause you’ll never win? |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
just stand on your head and the frown turns upside down ![]() |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
I liked this A LOT. I have never gone from such a crummy mood to silly giggly from just reading a poem... Thank you for sharing.. You turned my frown upside down ![]() ![]() |
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stevebrklynnyc Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 292GA, Camden |
I can identify with every line. Great job, Steve. |
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