Open Poetry #33 |
Of Things That Float |
James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Of Things That Float Is it only a matter of displacement and mass, gravity the common enemy? Gravity is also an uncommon friend, to whom we owe a life and life, and there’s more to the thought. Visualize balloons, then picture an astronaut. They float, those luxuriant balloons, gently rising falling; the spaceman doing neither, but he’s so high and his rocket has moved him into orbits of his own, so high the very word turns silly. But he’s floating, isn’t he, and I who skim the surface long to dive, recline on sand, gaze up at these beauties, rather than peering down, eyes trapped in space. Having sunk, Would I, could I float? How far, deep, and to what end? Never naked in air perhaps, but my spirit glides, surfs waves I only partially imagine, and would wholly experience, though I drown ~~J [This message has been edited by James_A_Fraser (07-06-2004 11:59 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I liked this one. -Juju |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jamie "but my spirit glides, surfs waves I only partially imagine, and would wholly experience, though I drown" To what length would a spirit go to do what it dreams, to dive from a cliff perhaps....so far above the sea to experience flying, even though the end could be to drown? And what then? A thoughtfilled poem, my friend. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Interesting read, thought provoking. Have you ever been scuba diving? Neutral buoyancy-- as if floating in mid water. Way cool. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very interesting read, Jamie. I had occasion to get some swimming in a week ago when on vacation [almost two weeks ago by now...] Anyway, I was able to enjoy the pool all to myself on two occasions, and just...floated. This poem reminded me of my taking a deep breath, and rising...and slowing releasing it, and feeling my body fall back a wee bit into the water. Much different when, as a child, all twiggy arms and not much bouyancy...so I felt the difference of age, and felt the burdenous weight of my daily life rise from me, knowing that even with age, even with weighty, ponderous decisions of life and nature... some things still float. I enjoyed this very, very much. Your presentation was perfect. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very well presented |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was stimulating and takes the reader to a place of your descriptions...like Marty said, "What Then" but then, who cares? The matter is to me, peace and harmony and while your floating, simply take along a snorkle, and all will be well.....smiles and hugs, and invigorating write. Thank you |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Your words took me on such a mental adventure... I started out laughing with thoughts of some of those very personal effects of gravity... but such fluff was rapidly displaced by the heights and depths you wrote... No heights exceed the levels to which your work soars... and the thought that such a spirit should sink at all is to define sadness. An incredible write to ponder again and again!! *S* [This message has been edited by suthern (07-08-2004 08:49 AM).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ahhh yes Jamie, much to ponder here. Wonderful work by you as usual m'friend Maree. The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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Mr»ÄlleÿÇät Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 190 |
Wow a Gr8 write James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Unique and wonderful! |
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