Open Poetry #33 |
you go with me |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
tomorrow I graduate 16 took the test 14 passed a class of 21 graduates 14 you have been with me every step of the way and I thank you you go with me it was you holding my hand in my fears you have been there tasting my tears a candle for me to study by at night the word I needed when I lost my sight where pain can be a test in disguise to push my feet so I could rise there never was a time I was alone as I walked the streets of unknown in a world of lock you are my key tomorrow I live a dream and you go with me "be prepared to bleed" Joni Mitchell |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Nice to be taken along Enjoyed the journey Proud of your accomplishment Gloom |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you never forget your class, it's a special bond |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Thanks for sharing the experince with your inspired words! Eric |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
thank you for sharing , very nice |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Smiling all day today for you. Wish I could be there to see you get badged and to throw you a party. CONGRATULATIONS and WELL DONE, Helen! |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Well written and congratulations! A job and a poem very well done. Love, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
psssst....helen.... Kraw wrote a poem just for you! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
kewl........congrats and atta girls....I like how you wrapped this up in heart |
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Mr»ÄlleÿÇät Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 190 |
What a lovely piece. |
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