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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2004-07-26 04:41 PM

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self absorption

isolation

pad the fragile heart;

bouquets tossed from spring pastels;

tick tock
the rain beats
redundant
onto self;

life and death
concurrent
within the drop

lost and found;
i am
without resolve

i coast above
for now;

telltale the childhood house
still wears the first window shattered;

sensaround
wrap around
insulation of echoed sound;

forsaking open streams
i cling, a raindrop
beating within the
comfort of my own self.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-07-26 04:57 PM

"sensaround
wrap around
insulation of echoed sound;"

I love reading you, Michelle. The above is just one reason why!

....jo

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2004-07-26 06:18 PM

very nice ... like the way it ripples on the tongue..and the way it slides across images

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2004-07-26 06:41 PM

Each word drips with a different emotion that flows into perfection...well done...I enjoyed reading it...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-07-26 06:54 PM

Excellent imagery Michele...very much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2004-07-26 09:50 PM

A thoughtful read. Much enjoyed.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-07-27 03:43 AM

sometimes the only comfort is self

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2004-07-27 04:26 AM

"telltale the childhood house
still wears the first window shattered"

deeply moving and felt.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2004-07-27 08:48 AM

"life and death
concurrent
within the drop"

~ Yes, "Within the Drop" of each of our universes ~ and yours is very unique and special.

May you "reign" forevermore!

EA

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

9 posted 2004-07-27 08:51 AM

sometimes we need that quality time...all to ourselves...

tremendous write and language used here, very much enjoyed.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

10 posted 2004-07-27 03:12 PM

thanks guys and dolls

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