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LeeJ
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0 posted 2004-07-27 07:39 AM


Reincarnated shades, your liquid silhouette
Like melting glass meandering toward sea creases
Elements gathering a life support system
Pushing through my heart’s star filled heaven
Waves, licking mysterious winds of center’s eye
Where a mind may recess, pondering a lover’s magi
Lingering spheres, amphetamine dialogues
Clairvoyant, stayed hands unfasten life’s prologue
Tasty imagination…
Flickering sea bottles nod,where torch lights yawn

There is where all contents, forge themselves in time
Setting courses, skipping with great forces
Sweet bare smiles, dancing ballet, swinging delight
Where nothing else may grow but nature’s rewrite

Personal concertos, filling empty stations of mind
Far off places, applauding arrival entwines
My, oh my, how they smile!
With fragrances like lavender, tracing evening’s profile
Soft electronic textures, with synthesized voice
Becomes the slightest breath of air, an artist’s watercourse


© Copyright 2004 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Susan
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walking the surreal
1 posted 2004-07-27 08:20 AM


This is simply devine.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2004-07-27 08:29 AM


the poem is paint and oil and water
in layers behind a screen
with lights and camera

question?  how do you get your left hand
on your right shoulder in the picture..I tried it and it really hurts..do you do yoga?

(hehe)

LeeJ
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3 posted 2004-07-27 08:44 AM


hehehehhe, dark, your a banana!...that is the hand of my girlfriend from South Carolina...we've known each other since 7th grade and I wasn't sure if she'd be offended if I'd post her pic on the internet with me?

yes, I knew you were kidding....
Yoga? Is that a new flavor from Dairy Queen?  hehehhehe  

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2004-07-27 08:52 AM


I always enjoy your poetic concertos and artistry!

May your pen always be filled with such illustrious ink!

Linda

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5 posted 2004-07-27 09:45 AM


Lee~
This opening is to *sigh* for ...

'Reincarnated shades, your liquid silhouette
Like melting glass meandering toward sea creases'


Ahhhh, yes~

And Dark's reply ... Tee-Hee~

Here's a little something for you~


*Huglets*
~*Marge*~



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the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
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Ericc
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6 posted 2004-07-27 11:01 AM


Beautiful!

Eric

passing shadows
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7 posted 2004-07-27 01:04 PM


wow Marge, that's neat!

Lee, fantastic expression here!

enjoyed the whole thread today

Midnitesun
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Gaia
8 posted 2004-07-27 01:17 PM


This is now one of my favorites from you, Lee.
LOL at the new flavor comment.

I'm keeping a copy of this canvas.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
9 posted 2004-07-27 02:38 PM


LeeJ
Watercolor, I'd say it was a fresco.

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