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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Between I placed oil on my fingers to touch you and applied it to the glass that separates us smearing further the distorted distance between "i wish your room had room for two" John Mayer |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
KEEPER !!!! hugs, Chris |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
mmmm... well done ma'am.. nicely done indeed.. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Whooaa. indeed a keeper. The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Brilliantly clear....beautifully written...A must read... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this Helen!! Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how you say so much with so few words |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
very fluid words and picture story told |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
glass is a window too not always a wall may yours have sun and moon soon and may it open so you can touch them both [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-27-2004 09:28 AM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
clear, clever and to the point, your marvelous in saying so much with so few words. |
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