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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I didn't intend to bend the rules very much or too bad with my suggestions that just seemed to seep down the sides of my pen like slow syrup in september but you said I did and that I just had to go to a more mature place to write my poems so the proper eyes would not have to be exposed to my intentional intentions and by the way would I send you some so you could read them later when you were home alone to see how bad I really was and if my suggestions could make you believe it really was you I knew ______________ Dark |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger Interesting read, enjoyed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I always read your words in that mature place...  Good to read you here, there, or at home. Morning hugs~ |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"would I send you some so you could read them later when you were home alone to see how bad I really was and if my suggestions could make you believe it really was you I knew" diggin it D  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
But compliance... can be so much fun. Thanks for the read, DS |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
There is something about your voice that I absolutely adore! Can we hear some more? What a way to be content huh? Good morning babe! It's better than I could have planned.. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Bending rules, huh? I think one of my last posts may have pushed the envelope, though I don't think I was truly aware of how far. I'm new at taking the curves But please continue to post here often for I do so enjoy your bend, just don't lean over so far. SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you make me smile... just because~ M |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and the essence that is you, flows through your every word...love to read you your a joy and a challenge at the same time...adventurous...action packed with a very deep awareness.... More...More...bravo...(standing up and clapping) Happy Friday!!!! |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
...like the twist on the end of this... ...sorry I missed... ~K~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
more syrup, please |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wherever you are, I will read |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
nice writing! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Enjoyed so much! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
that just seemed to seep down the sides of my pen like slow syrup in september =============================== oh yeah... and I got the waffles in the toaster.. great poem DS..love your sense of humor. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
very intentional syrup sliding out here and very effective write. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
This is fantastic... i too seem to have no control over what comes out the other end of the pen... anyway... wonderful read thanks chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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