Open Poetry #33 |
I Smile |
whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
There you were Glowing with happiness As embracing In your arms The beautiful new Little bundle I watched you grow As into his eyes You Stared lovingly Taking in every movement Yawn How much difference Nine months would make To ones life The moment eyes are set upon That tiny face I remembered that feeling Not to long ago When it was me in your position Looking down into my little ones Big eyes I see the love you project It makes me feel all warm What a great mother you will be Already are instantly Maternal I smile I know I see You two "Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. " |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A poem that this mother can truly appreciate. ~ and "I Smile"... EA |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
beautifully beautifully done |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
precious |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Smiling at this... Beautiful Julie. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I would smile, too -- lovely poem! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
So sweet . . . Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
When you look into a childs eyes you can see the glimt of love in them, whne you see the mother or father holding this litle new child you see that glimt in there eyes too. I enjoyed and i did smile too. Smile Jes / Dreamer |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
You spotlight your heart with these words. Beautiful poetry! JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
so sweet and tender... i love this chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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