Open Poetry #33 |
kiss-kiss |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
welcome friends and thieves of heart my door is open here thou art granted access given leave to take the very dregs of me prisms on the floor impart nothing up my sleeve Oh what? is this nuisance bothering nodding nodding "pray, I greet" Grant me brief departure please? Then shoot me in the back I plead: "I don't wanna know." |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Hi Enjoyed Smile Jes |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
ok, so I won't tell you M |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Uh-oh...reminds me of a story.... but that's for another forum... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I guess this doesn't apply to me, as I always sit with my back to the wall. Well done Ser. hugs, Chrislane Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
wow is this powerful or what? |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Ummm, methinks, m'witch, that you do wanna know....it's just your way of things. kiss-kiss y'yeti |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Chrislane? This one wasn't written for anybody in these blue pages. tsk... Just a bit of inspiration I found while contemplating the prospect of having to hostess a party for people that I don't like and who don't like me. All that phoniness, yanno? Thus the "kiss-kiss" title...that "air kissy" thing that people do to pretend that they like somebody they'd rather not even TOUCH. smile? You folks ain't phonies. I know. I've seen you all nekkid. I read your poetry! gleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee HUGS! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I can see this one! Phoniness and insincerity drive me crazy... When I don't like people, they know it... Take my father for example. Heh, he knows! Love your writing. Always so real... Always, Alyssa Poems are made by fools like me, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
One of the reasons I don't socialize much anymore....you pegged it! Hope you make it through okay (who's kidding, I know you will). kiss kiss (lol - but with real sentiment), jo |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
You folks ain't phonies. I know. I've seen you all nekkid. Now gist wait one country minit here, Serenity. The only time ya seen me nekked is when I wrote Bath Away the Day, I Say!(Sadie/Sadelite).Granted, I wrote a poem about my daughter hurrying me to the mall when I was sitting in my slip at the computer. But...I remembered to run back in the house for my skirt in the nick of time (not nekked at all dat time!). I know exactly what you've so creatively and expertly conveyed! Nice job! I've missed ya. misc'e |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I read in one of your replies, what the inspiration for this poem was and that made the poem all the more perfect to me! Yes, I do so know what you mean by those phony, airy, kissy-kisses! Oh, well, I must admit that I've given a few of them myself! As they say, "When in Rome, do as the Romans do!" lol ~ but I usually kiss with lots of love behind it! Sending you a big, warm, real hug! Linda |
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