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Jes
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since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

0 posted 2004-07-23 03:26 AM

Lets see the sound of a Green Botle..
Or shall i say lets hear the view of a Green Botle..

You see the litle water drops on the outside..
You hear teh litle tscchhhh, when you open it..
Our joy becomes so wide..
And now the candle can be lit..

The first touch when it runs down the alley..
Its saying gluck gluck gluck and a litle ahhhh..
It opens the port to the big old Valley..
Now we can sing and say - Tadaaaaaa..

The feeling doesnt last so long..
and when its empty the sound is like none..
Afterwards it feels so wrong..
I throw out that Green Botle and now its done..

We saw the sound of that Green Botle..
Or shall i say we heard the view of that Green Botle..

I guess i would just call it a Beer !

Smile

Jes

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-07-23 03:35 AM

Many *smiles* ! Enjoyed the libation!

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2004-07-23 05:41 AM

It's completely understandable.

You folks in Denmark brew a great beer, m'friend.

*burp*

Another for me, and while yer at it, I'll buy one for the house.

(Lucky for me I'm the only one here, huh?)

Jes
Member

since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

3 posted 2004-07-23 06:08 AM

iliana

Hi Iliana, smiles back at ya i enjoyed it too lol.

Serenity blaze

Hehehe made me smile

And one for the house i thought we had many members here, we will empty Tuborgs storage with a round on the house lol.

Im glad you enjoyed.

Smile

Jes

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2004-07-23 07:57 AM

Jes
If it wasn't so early I'd join you. LOL
Enjoyed

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2004-07-23 09:08 AM

well then, move aside Sy and make room for me...never to early...hehehhhe
Cheers to a tremendous poem filled with creative imagry. Thank you

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

6 posted 2004-07-23 09:46 AM

Beer aint my drink but enjoyed the poem can input something I find that refreshing. Well written

"Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. "

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

7 posted 2004-07-23 09:56 AM

I saw the same thing last night... twice!
Heehee... Great write.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2004-07-23 09:59 AM

It's beer o'clock somewhere

count me in

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2004-07-23 12:23 PM

and you know I'll be there!

Jes
Member

since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

10 posted 2004-07-23 03:32 PM

Seymour Tabin

Yeah i know the time difference, but i have kept one cold for ya, for later, smile.

LeeJ

There is always room for one more, and thanks for ya comment, smile.

whiskey

We could also make another.

You hear the sound pling pling pling, the litle shaking of a glass with cubes of ice..
Now the litle squeze of whiskey inside,
its sounds so nice..

The taste is another..
We can make one for eachother..

Thanks for the comment, Smile.

JL

I saw those twins too lol

Thanks

SEA

Is it time, always welcome, smile

passing shadows
We wouldnt start without you, smile.

I see a few got a litle grin today happy to see.

Smile

Jes

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2004-07-23 08:23 PM

I have been told that the beer in a green
bottle is the best? A cute write Jes...
I felt it going down the hatch, so to speak.

Jes
Member

since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

12 posted 2004-07-23 08:58 PM

Magnus

Famous mark in Denmark is Tuborg, smile here its in a green botle.

And im happy you enjoyed the taste, hehe.

Smile

Jes

Life is for me to be - but always with a smile !

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

13 posted 2004-07-23 10:14 PM

Wonderful write!!
I have visited your wonderful country as well.
Enjoyed the Tuborg beer..
but prefered touring the home of Hans Christian Andersen.

Hugs!!!

Jes
Member

since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

14 posted 2004-07-24 04:42 AM

Enchantress

Thanks for the comment.

Yes ive seen one of his houses too smile, though i live to the southest of denamrk you can reach.

Smile

Jes

Life is for me to be - but always with a smile !

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

15 posted 2004-07-25 02:45 AM

Enjoyed the feel.  I'm not much of a drinker, but I felt as if I held Green Botle
and had to lift it up and tap it to get every last drop!

   Fun read.
                misc'e

Jes
Member

since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

16 posted 2004-07-25 05:17 AM

miscellanea

Yes funny how words can make imagination.

Glad you enjoyed.

Smile

Jes

Life is for me to be - but always with a smile !

CMGrimm
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since 2000-02-14

Posts 685
USA

17 posted 2004-07-25 09:37 AM

very very good... almost too good... i need a beer

chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

18 posted 2004-07-25 09:51 AM

Oh, I hearya! I'd love to split a "green botle" with you! Due to my delicate "angel" constitution, half a bottle is all my body can handle!

Cheers!
EA

Jes
Member

since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

19 posted 2004-07-25 11:41 AM

CMGrimm

Hehe yes its like magic some times, smile, hope it tasted good, and glad ya enjoyed.

Smile

Jes

Earth Angel

You can have half of mine lol i guess i had enough now.

Glad ya enjoyed.

Smile

Jes

Life is for me to be - but always with a smile !

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