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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-07-22 04:02 PM

Private

do not flatter yourself
in that you are the topic
of my conversations
as I sit with friends
for you are a poison
that only laces lips
to be sipped in private

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2004-07-22 04:03 PM

ooooooooooo

very good

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-07-22 04:06 PM

Oh my....good one Helen!
Love the 'ouch' in this.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2004-07-22 04:06 PM

I could almost hear a slap!

To the P O I N T.

JL

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

4 posted 2004-07-22 04:58 PM

ooh ouch...
and good!

Always, Alyssa

Poems are made by fools like me,
But only God can make a tree.
Joyce kilmer

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-07-23 12:04 PM

Ouuuuwie! Great poem!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-07-23 03:02 AM

smack!

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

7 posted 2004-07-23 09:00 AM

wow...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2004-07-23 09:05 AM

so does that mean
that the infatuation
is not as dynamic
as he might have imagined?

dang girl you got your spankers out

but they look good on you

dug it

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

9 posted 2004-07-23 09:12 AM

well, I took this in a more intimate and playful way....meaning, his poison is your entoxication to be discussed only by the two of you in privet??????

Either way, I liked

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

10 posted 2004-07-24 04:43 PM

mm hmm....
the poison you can't live without
and won't share...

~K~

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

11 posted 2004-07-29 03:06 PM

Talk about puncture to an ego! *G*

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