Open Poetry #33 |
Guardian Spirit |
Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Guardian Spirit You’re with me now within me now; I wrap my wings around you. Stay, oh stay and shelter here within the umbra of my caring; know that you are always mine, and I am yours. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
beautiful, Ed M |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A beautiful guardian you're holding here... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed "umbra"...what a beautiful word, and a loving poem! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The melding of two spirits... how utterly divine. Love & Light, Linda |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Now, that is what I call an EMBRACE! Beautiful.......jo |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
You write with such tenderness. Appreciated more then you know. This is simply beautiful! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
a guardian well equipped with a comforting heart... What a sweet, loving rendering! misc'e |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good reminder that we all have one |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sometimes, we equate softness with lack of strength... what a mistake that is... This delicate embrace is a picture of power... and a knowledge of what's important. *S* Superb write! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
smiling... Enjoyed this much.... very much. |
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