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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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~*~*~ In dreamscapes you become translucent blurring my heart ache like watercolors bleed into one another transcend and transpire with a touch of finesse that is more beautiful than painful beyond the horizon where the sun sets and rises. ~*~*~ |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
simply... beautiful poetry ~snow "yet each man kills the thing he loves |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you kindly for taking the time. I appreciate it Snow~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Well, there is of course only one word to describe this and that's "beautiful". |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Exquisite Bluesy lady... Love this!! Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
beyond the horizon is a most beautiful place to rest a while aaahhhhhhhhhh how lovely with a touch of blue...... miss u girlfriend |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My goodness, that was sooooo poetic ~ sooooo vivid ~ sooooooo healing ~ sooooo beautiful! Understanding hugs 'n smiles, Linda |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sighing here....another keeper! hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write  |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
blurring my heart ache like watercolors bleed into one another I hope the heartache eases when blurred, and stops the bleeding colors. Nicely done. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
more beautiful than painful... but still so painful yes I know the feeling |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Blues~ This is very pretty~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"like watercolors bleed into one another transcend and transpire with a touch of finesse" Love these lines Bluesy...  |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Today, I REALLY needed some sense of the beautiful part of life. "like watercolors bleed into one another transcend and transpire with a touch of finesse" TAG, you're it! *smile* |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Lovely, Blues! Watercolors are a wonderful medium. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Mr»ÄlleÿÇät Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 190 |
Beautiful Blue, the best I can do is spray. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Poetic perfection! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I read this earlier and I just had to come back for antoher read. so pretty, bluesy! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Well, I came for my first read....and this is a beautiful piece of poetry..love the blending.. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
transcend and transpire with a touch of finesse ========================== a bittersweet beauty you have penned here Lori--visually lovely, with vocabulary and assonance that made reading aloud a poetic pleasure. Lovely lovely poetess girlie. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I've had such dreams....one in fact, that has repeated hundreds of times, over more decades than I care to count (four)....and always that transparency, that disappearing. But that's how dreams are, I guess. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
This is a keeper! "A spring shower was cause to run |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Absolutely lovely, my friend. *S* |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I appreciate your nice replies, it means a lot to me. Thank you, one and all~ |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
So vivid and exquisitely beautiful. Your imagery is simply remarkable. When I see your posts I know I can count on wonderful pictures painted with words. I enjoy your writing. You are a gifted painter of words. Kevin |
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