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devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

0 posted 2004-07-19 09:33 PM

My senses enhance
As we dance
To the beat of our own drum

No one can know
Our hearts grow
For the touch of one another

Shh. Do you hear?
Growing is the fear
Goodnight for now, perhaps later.

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

1 posted 2004-07-19 09:39 PM

Heheh!
I beet the moderators!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

rolmbo!

congrats by becoming the senior

Juju

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

2 posted 2004-07-19 09:41 PM

Thanks very much!

~~~***~~~Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland~~~***~~~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2004-07-19 10:06 PM

Poem gives you a sense of urgency, of
some caution and yet also some excitement..
Awaiting a moment... Love is that way...

Thank you for commenting on my poem...
That was a most intriguing time of earth's
history.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2004-07-19 10:14 PM

Hush, friendship is spoken.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

5 posted 2004-07-19 10:50 PM

this whispers to me..lovely...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-07-20 12:51 PM

*sigh* understanding this

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

7 posted 2004-07-20 03:33 PM

Thanks a lot for the feedback. I really like to hear it so that I can grow. I'm glad that you guys liked it! It's pretty personal but it's nice to know that others relate. I don't feel so alone now.
*Allison*

~~~***~~~Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland~~~***~~~

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

8 posted 2004-07-20 11:05 PM

Enjoyed!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

9 posted 2004-07-21 01:28 PM

I like this very much... the rhyme and the tenderness... and the tension that builds. *S*

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