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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-07-19 09:00 AM

tin foil bubble gum
tooth ache fingernails
with sharp edges
licking a candy cane
dipped in salty
and they call it coffee

denny's socks perhaps
with a flat boy's cleavage
after a sweaty day
of milking skunks
and you said I didn't listen well
when you told me all about you

my mind was elsewhere
and that it was obvious too
by my yawns and finger tap radios
you said you were not impressed
and that a man should appreciate
a woman of your stature

I said I did sometimes
and that the back of you was lovely
and doorways should know you
as you leave through them
with your lovely showing behind
I asked if you jogged sometimes

and if you did would you, could you now
______________

Dark

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-07-19 09:03 AM

what a polite way to say adios...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2004-07-19 09:09 AM

Dark Stranger
LOL enjoyed, you should get Toerag to read you stuff.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-07-19 09:14 AM

Sounds like you were giving her the brush off D.
Love your stuff...specially in the morning.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2004-07-19 11:15 AM

well...you are certainly understanding and gentlemanly in your heart...wishing you and she an understanding...and compassion for each others plight...

Good morning, a tremendous read

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

5 posted 2004-07-19 11:50 AM

haha, love it!
~K~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-07-19 12:54 PM

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

7 posted 2004-07-19 02:43 PM

I said I did sometimes
and that the back of you was lovely
and doorways should know you
as you leave through them
with your lovely showing behind
I asked if you jogged sometimes

lol. Doorways should know you as you leave them. What a great line. Thanks for the chuckle and grin. You do have a sharp wit about you.

Susan

btw, my friend loved the banana poem.

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2004-07-19 07:07 PM

you all are too kind........this was long ago the first time...and an instant replay a few days ago...now I remember why she didn't like me..lol blah blah blah...

it was a fun write and there aren't any bad people really...just some bad snapshots taken with the mind sometimes.

I feel pretty special when you folks read and grin or grimace..thanks to each of you again.

D

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

9 posted 2004-07-19 07:39 PM

I think I have a new addiction

don't tell my boyfriend he'll get jealous lol

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

10 posted 2004-07-19 08:45 PM

They always do look great going away...that way. Not you boogaloo...you have to stay and make us think things we ought not be thinkin'. I do have to read you.

Love,
Reg

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

11 posted 2004-07-20 03:31 AM

Very sophisticated humor, well done!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

12 posted 2004-07-20 04:27 AM

and if you did would you, could you now

I'll have to think about it!!

Such a creative genius you are, DS!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

13 posted 2004-07-20 05:10 PM

and you said I didn't listen well
when you told me all about you

I started laughing with those lines... and am still. *G* I think I know her!!!! LOL

Excellent!!!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

14 posted 2004-07-20 05:21 PM

Well Dark,  I am certainly grinnin, cause
you have such a masterful way of saying
things.  I wish I had that knack at times.

Glad this was long ago,  but sometimes even
once ain't enough.

BTW...I loved your title...fits well.

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

15 posted 2004-07-21 03:16 AM

you are so bad! What tact...I am impressed..and I confess i laughed

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