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Some thoughts in a day.
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Some thoughts in a day. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
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Every thought I try to share They run within me everywhere So many that I often find A storm is brewing in my mind I’ve day to day, the normal things The tests that every moment brings I’ve got my dreams that give me hope While draining strengths that help me cope I share my child, this fragile mind In hope that all will treat it kind I write of things that in me rave By way of word that helps to save I live the life of normal man And doing with it best I can I’m kind to all who wish to share And find a vision’s coat to wear So camouflaged the truth I seek Till findings with my words all speak Of day to day of life and time Of feelings that with words combine |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You have found a "vision's coat to wear" this morning Great line! Liz |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"So camouflaged the truth I seek Till findings with my words all speak Of day to day of life and time Of feelings that with words combine" ~ I feel the words you speak of day to day of life and time. Visions from a "normal" man are so real and identifiable by your readers, Rick! I do so enjoy that mind child of yours! Love & Poetic Light, Linda |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Liz, great to see you, it is funny how some lines just come to you and you like them, it just worked, thank you so much for the comment dear friend. I did the couple of clicks for you, good luck to her. Dear Linda, my friend, the words are the mist that lies above my pool of reality, I dare not drive too deeply, there might be too much to find, we all as poets seek a vision, seeing through the mist is often enough for the light beyond appears as a rainbow. The poetic light. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and time, so much appreciated dear friend. To you both my friends, again thank you. Sincerely Rick |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I am glad you are here and sharing  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So camouflaged the truth I seek Till findings with my words all speak Of day to day of life and time Of feelings that with words combine Bravo! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
outstanding optimisum... word has it that your life is not as simple as you lead us to believe, yup, yup yup, they say you wrestle alligators, and hunt venemous snakes...and over there they call you Outback Rick, the Aussie whom all the girls swoon over... Smiles and hugs...you are always a joy to read |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Always enjoy your writings Rick. hugs, Chris  Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Absolutely wonderful write! JL |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Another wonderful write by you my friend. Much enjoyed the read. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is a lovely write. Sandra |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
To you all again my friends, my deepest thank you goes, always wonderful to see you all reply, thank you for sharing your moments and replies. All be well and take care till next we meet. Sincerely Rick |
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