Open Poetry #33 |
Brush Of Lace |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Sentiment that conjures up sensations Lifting lightly in the breeze Weightless Folds and gathers Folds and gathers Tugged, the anchor of your gaze Turned transparent gauze Against the glow of pause Outlines Float and Shadow Float and Shadow Draped in drams of softness Curl and flutter Cream and butter A touch away To skirt or sway Copyright Kkh 7/18/04 |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This reads like a summer breeze, and made my heart fly. Lovely lovely, Lady~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
TD -- I feel like I was just brushed by lacey curtains swaying in a gentle breeze while sitting in a rocking chair, just remembering....... Lovely poem, here! ......jo |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely Kathleen, As gentle as a summer breeze. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
You made me smile with this delicate write. Very nice. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
floating on the coattails of the wind reading uplifting words |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nice feelings from this K. Well done... such imagery...top shelf for sure. |
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