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Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

0 posted 2004-07-17 08:43 PM

Hush . . .

Be still.

Can you feel it?

The passing of time?

It rubs by
Brushing close
Enticing . . .

Tempting one to reach—

To enact its capture
To still its flow

Held within a breath
Endless in the moment
A stilled beat of heart . . .

Your touch upon my flesh.

s.a.t.

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

1 posted 2004-07-17 08:47 PM

Lovely, Susan. Yes, to hush that brush of time. Enjoyed,
misc'e

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-07-17 09:18 PM

Very, very elegant! Hope you're doing well, Susan.......jo

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

3 posted 2004-07-17 09:23 PM

Your words flowed so beautifully.
*Allison*

~~~***~~~Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland~~~***~~~

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2004-07-17 10:34 PM

Oh Wow...how sensual can a write be?
Superb dear Poetess.
TD

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2004-07-17 10:34 PM

soft as a butterfly spreading across the sky

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-07-17 10:38 PM

So soft and sensual...beautiful Susan!
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

kayjay
Member Elite

since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

7 posted 2004-07-17 10:43 PM

I like this! The awareness of time passing gently, then the passion of your last line. Well done. KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2004-07-17 10:57 PM

How utterly poetic!

Loverly!

Linda

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2004-07-17 11:17 PM

Delicate...soft and sensual, with a stilled
beat to accentuate the stillness of time.

Well Done Susan.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

10 posted 2004-07-17 11:25 PM

From my heart to yours, your kind replies blossom within, thank you.

susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2004-07-17 11:51 PM

and those are the times we wish would never end, yes

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

12 posted 2004-07-18 11:56 AM

P.S. so true.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

13 posted 2004-07-18 05:29 PM

Very Ethereal, Susan!

You have a kind face, btw!
Corinne

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

14 posted 2004-07-18 08:44 PM

Corrine, what a sweet compliment -- thank you.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

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