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Keepers of the flame
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Keepers of the flame |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL 
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In that captured moment between Inhaling and exhaling, The few seconds of rest Connecting beats And in the instant of thought…… Life slips from us. Robert This just came to my door....and I lay it at yours. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you sure make my "morning" coffee taste so much better good morning Robert, even though it's really afternoon, unless you're a night owl like me  |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Perfectly penned and going into my library! Awesome Robert. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. Hans Christian Anderson |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
wow when you come back from a weekend away you don't come home empty handed... *smiles* i really love this. at first, by the title, i was reminded of a piece of art i saw when i was visiting Indiana... yes... this is off to my library. i do so love when i see your name. S~ "yet each man kills the thing he loves |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
enjoyed the moment, in suspended breath and thought |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Profoundly expressed Robert. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Robert It's good that you keep your door open for such thoughts.  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I held my breath at the end. Like passing the Olympic torch, it is -- amazing metaphor. Great write, Robert!  .....jo |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I knew when I saw your name I was in for a treat... and I was not disappointed. Excellent! Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
RobertB - I heard it knocking and glad I stopped by for a read... BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I gather that you refrain from posting until you have something of great import to share!  Love & Light, EA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RobertB~ SOLID GOLD *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
yes... i had to come back already. ~S "yet each man kills the thing he loves |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Most excellent write TD |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
I actually had to consciously breath to understand the nuances of this piece.... true.... at that moment, you will never inhale again..... makes one cherish every breath one is priviledged to take. Love, Light and Peace, Sherry |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Excellent write... *~coco*~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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