Open Poetry #33 |
Sun & Moon |
soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Sun & Moon Lost in the bittersweet the bitter deep inside me swelling aching for your approving smile that I've been missing all this while all the time you've stayed away I've been discovering my inner self that you suspected I hid away from you the conversations ring in my head the regrets we shared evaporating within the intangible wamth that we pretended wasn't there there were days, so many days when the words between us slowed to a calm drizzle playing our blues on the cold streets but I was always happy you were listening I was always in love with the music you'd make in shades of faded blue catching my attention and my heart trapping our emotions together in a net of this relationship I call deep as the ocean and high as the sky kindred spirits finding eachother in the shadows beyond the love we chase down like the sun chases the moon never will it end "Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Like the sun chases the moon - cool! Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Wow! this was passionate, I loved how the words would keep on building faster and faster...like a flame from the sun...your poetry is hot and searing! Great title...fits perfect! ~Love and hugs Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I have to share this with my daughter....she loves this kind of theme |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Zach~ Welcome to Passions~ Greatly enjoyed this read~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Excellent! *~coco~* |
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