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The Touch of You
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The Touch of You |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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The Touch of You I remember the touch of you A finger brushing my skin with feather lightness Arms that wrapped around my contentment Thighs that pulled like an undertow beneath folds of linen Hands that clasped like a warm gripping vice The feel of you is in my eyes. A visual sense, a sensual vision A dream of reality, a fantasy of truth Memories are bathed in sensual pools of completeness And snuggled in infant wraps of tranquility By day, the breeze caresses my yearning And by night soft sheets stroke my solitude But remembering is not the same as living the feel I ache for the touch of you I long to live the tenderness that glides so swiftly through my mind I want my skin to shiver in the heat of bonding And my face to sweat in the cold of nakedness I want to be carried by ocean streams And caressed by soothing foam I want to churn in the waves and rock to the rhythms of moving waters I am lured by desirous thoughts And pulled by umbilical threads of joy And yet, time wants me to forget But love has given birth to need And my skin still remembers its newborn cradle And longs to be laid again in its warmth Let it glide once more in ethereal heights of pleasure Let it be immersed in liquid depths of ecstasy Let it feel the feather light stroke of a finger The pressing warmth of manly weight The comforting refuge of enfolding flesh The tenderness of caring The gentleness of admiration The openness of truth The sincerity of love The touch of you The infinite and exquisite touch of you Elizabeth Santos |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
WOW what a great way to start a day  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hey Liz, Good Morning  Great to see you...how are you doing This was a lovely feeling you've shared here and to me, what life is all about.... He is a fortunate man, very fortunate man. Smiles and hugs for your happiness...love ya Me |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
WOW SO SO SENSUAL Lady Santos your ability is astounding.You took the words and made then so full of emotion. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz The warm embrace of your words, desplay the passion of your heart. What a filled up emotional poem...love it!  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The touch of you is too, too sweet... I certainly enjoyed our three way conversation, Liz...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, You have made my mind and heart joust again. On the field of my honors examen. This is a jewel I would keep. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
But remembering is not the same as living the feel I ache for the touch of you I long to live the tenderness that glides so swiftly through my mind I want my skin to shiver in the heat of bonding And my face to sweat in the cold of nakedness I want to be carried by ocean streams And caressed by soothing foam I want to churn in the waves and rock to the rhythms of moving waters I am lured by desirous thoughts And pulled by umbilical threads of joy And yet, time wants me to forget But love has given birth to need And my skin still remembers its newborn cradle And longs to be laid again in its warmth Let it glide once more in ethereal heights of pleasure Let it be immersed in liquid depths of ecstasy Let it feel the feather light stroke of a finger The pressing warmth of manly weight The comforting refuge of enfolding flesh The tenderness of caring The gentleness of admiration The openness of truth The sincerity of love The touch of you The infinite and exquisite touch of you Oh, my... Oh WOW... oh YES!!!! *S* Not of my pen, but definitely of my heart... I wish I had written this... Into my library it goes! *S* |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Lord, Oh Elizabeth, oh WOW. The passion in this is just so stirring. A brilliant write. Maree cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
The first line...(for those of us that know you), says it all...and I know why this was written...and I understand....Very beautiful write...now, off to take a shower...(a cold one).... |
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