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Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2004-07-17 01:25 AM

I SAY LET US LOOSE,
FROM YOUR HANGMAN'S NOOSE.
YOU SAY I MUST SUFFER,
I GROW THAT MUCH TOUGHER.
Free your mind...
Disposition yourself to see blurry,
Rush and move in such a scurry.
Everyone's pointing their fingers,
And it's the thought that lingers.
I say let us loose,
I SAY LET US LOOSE,
FROM YOUR HANGMAN'S NOOSE.
YOU SAY I MUST SUFFER,
I GROW THAT MUCH TOUGHER.
Free your mind...
Overlook the mind of a creative genius child,
Mumble and stutter as if frightend in the wild.
Cast your scorns and hatrid filled words,
And all we hear is the chirping of birds.
I SAY LET US LOOSE,
FROM YOUR HANGMAN'S NOOSE.
YOU SAY I MUST SUFFER,
I GROW THAT MUCH TOUGHER.
Free your mind...

Victims....aren't we all?

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2004-07-17 03:19 AM

Disposition yourself to see blurry,
Rush and move in such a scurry.
Everyone's pointing their fingers,
And it's the thought that lingers.

Isn't it though, or so I've been told!!
Ya know what they say, we are what we eat!

good stuff, snowflake!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-07-17 04:19 AM

I can hear the music now

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-07-17 11:47 AM

I must think on this one. But my gut reaction is one of empathy and prayer for the healing of a soul, the end of suffering.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-07-17 01:09 PM

Would love to hear this put to music Kyle.
Well done.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-07-17 03:33 PM

It is the thought that lingers. Good one, SFH!

.....jo

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2004-07-19 08:05 AM

Hi Kyle...a good message to deliver and yes, would love to hear this one to music.

Hugs...Lee J.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2004-07-19 08:26 AM

You, Dear Hot Flakes, sound strong and tough enough to remove any and all, hangmen's nooses! You won't allow yourself to be rifled and stifled!

With an impassioned write such as that, YOU are the power to be reckoned with!

Rise up and shine on!

EA

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

8 posted 2004-07-21 09:07 AM

yeah

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