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miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

0 posted 2004-07-16 01:52 PM

To him she wrote:

     "I’ll be your daydream
     And you can be mine.

     If you bring wild flower memories
     I’ll keep the black and white in line.

               We’ll trod along the rolling hill
             Then spread the cloth of mine,
            Red and white checkered
              Fit for strategies of chess

               We’ll talk of things
             Make no sense
              Worry of nothing
               Touch dimple dents
                As we smile within
              each other.

    So bring those wildflowers;
    I’ll be your daydream
    And you can be mine."


       "I'll keep the black and white in line,
         my Sweets,
        While you dream us into
         living color."

        Her words whispered within his touch
        The Braille.

[This message has been edited by miscellanea (07-17-2004 02:31 AM).]

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-07-16 02:18 PM

smiles and hugs, very precious read.

  We’ll trod along the rolling hill
             Then spread the cloth of mine,
            Red and white checkered
              Fit for strategies of chess

Very much enjoyed.

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2004-07-16 03:08 PM

Simply beautiful poetry! Great write.

JL

kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

3 posted 2004-07-16 08:14 PM

Nicely written!! Welcome aboard, I look forward to more of your writing. KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-07-16 08:16 PM

Very beautiful...much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-07-16 11:24 PM

Very clever and lovely poetry, misc'e. Enjoyed!

....jo

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2004-07-16 11:31 PM

Simply lovely -- sigh.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

7 posted 2004-07-17 05:55 AM

wow...

very pretty

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2004-07-19 03:36 PM

    So bring those wildflowers;
    I’ll be your daydream
    And you can be mine."


       "I'll keep the black and white in line,
         my Sweets,
        While you dream us into
         living color."

        Her words whispered within his touch
        The Braille.

I knew I was going to like this from the moment I saw the title... and I was right! *S* Excellent work!!!

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

9 posted 2004-07-19 05:44 PM

Love this! A keeper! hugs, Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

10 posted 2004-07-19 07:34 PM

definately a keeper..enjoyed

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

11 posted 2005-03-14 10:05 PM

This is Beautiful...... I love it : )

~~ Connie ~~

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